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Two lands converged on a single road
And at its end they trailed away
In one direction lay the darkest mire
And in the other, a valley bright with day

Every person has stood at that ending
But not every person knew it was a choice
Because not every person had made the decision
That allowed them to hear a still small voice

And so with shock, so many of us
Have found ourselves walking into the mire
Because God directed us from the easier road
Though our hearts and minds would tire

Our feet sank with every step we took
The mud threatening to drag us down
The blackbirds laughed with shrieking song
Every time it appeared we'd drown

And we could never understand the reason
That we were sent on a path rife with pain
Or why the dirt and blood never washed off
With the cold and acidic rain

And we could never understand the purpose
Behind the grief, the torment, the shock
That left the blackbirds circling our minds
Searching for doubts that they could mock

But the blackbirds' wings began to buckle
And in a spiral their feathers began to fall
Because the sun broke through the canopy
And dried the mud surrounding us all

Through we experience tribulations
God will guide us through our miseries
A strong tower when we are deserted
Though His plan remains a mystery

We are the children who chose to be lead
And with that choice comes a necessary trust
That though we fall and may start to sink
We will walk on because we must
©2008-2009 ~NonplusGray
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Author's Comments

Last night, a friend of mine and his fiance died in a car accident. He was a senior in high school. I can not even begin to explain why this happened, but I must trust that God had a reason. More than any other question I've heard since I found out, I've heard people ask "Why?" We don't know why, we can't know why, but we have to understand a reason exists and that God has not abandoned us in this.

I've been writing for the last three hours, just typing anything that came into my head and trying to find something in any of it. This poem is the first conclusive thing I've managed.

Romans 8:38-39
2 Corithians 1:5
Lamentations 3:31-33

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:iconbananasplit2010:
That was really good, Izzy.
Thanks for writing this.. Because honestly...i couldn't... i tried so hard to put something down but i couldn't.
The funeral is wed or thurs. are you willing to play in the alumi/varsity band? It's just the oldest kids.

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"Can miles truly separate you from friends... If you want to be with someone you love, aren't you already there?"
Richard Bach
Eph 4:4,5
One Lord, one faith, one baptism; one God and Father of all, who is over all and through all and in all."
:iconnonplusgray:
Thank you. Yes, I'll play.

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There will be an answer
Let it be
:iconbananasplit2010:
I'll give the official time as soon as i know. They are trying to hurry although I advised against it.

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"Can miles truly separate you from friends... If you want to be with someone you love, aren't you already there?"
Richard Bach
Eph 4:4,5
One Lord, one faith, one baptism; one God and Father of all, who is over all and through all and in all."
:iconmeowsap:
Let me know when the funeral is please.

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I always thought love was shaped like a heart,
But its actually shaped like a cross!
:iconmeowsap:
I think this really covers how many of us feel right now. :(
I'd like to add this verse too: Psalm 34:18

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I always thought love was shaped like a heart,
But its actually shaped like a cross!
:iconbananasplit2010:
wed or thurs i'll post asap.

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"Can miles truly separate you from friends... If you want to be with someone you love, aren't you already there?"
Richard Bach
Eph 4:4,5
One Lord, one faith, one baptism; one God and Father of all, who is over all and through all and in all."
:iconmeowsap:
Ok, thanks. :)

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I always thought love was shaped like a heart,
But its actually shaped like a cross!
:iconthornyroses:
thats really good...I agree with marie i think it pretty much covers everyones feelings at the time.

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Life is short! Break the rules! Forgive quickly! Kiss slowly!
Love truly, Laugh uncontrollably..
And never regret anything that made you smile.

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